a girl in my mirror

[al ainee]

There's a girl in my mirror crying tonight
I can't do anything to make her feel allright
she says her days are turning into blue
after they were so bright with u
***
she says since you've been gone her life is going wrong
she's so confused, finding nowhere to belong
she's lost without you, finding no where to belong
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so why don't you come and wipe away her tears
why don't you come and fight away her fears
get her out of the blue...hold her too close to you
***


maybe you'll find some mistakes just tell my when u find one
by the way....I wrote it

[تعز العز]

هل هي ترجمه صحيحه لاعزائي الاعضاء من تعز العز وحقيقه هذه المشاركه من العضو الجديد قمه الروعه والاحساس

هناك فتاه في مرآتي تبكي اللّيلة
لا يمكن أن أعمل أي شيئ لها
تقول أيّامها تتحول الى أزرق
بعد أن كانت مضيئه جدًّا مع...
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تقول منذ قد ذُهِبْتَ أنّ حياتها تسوء
هي مضطربة جدًّا, تجد ليس في أيّ مكان للخصوص
قد خسرت بدونك, تجد لا أين تذهب ***

لذا لماذا لا تجيء و تمسح دموعها
لماذا لا تجيء و تحارب بعيدًا مخاوفها
خذها فجأة ...امسك هي قريب جدًّا منك
***


روعه روعه وقمة الرقه
انا فهمت الكثير من المعنى وحبيت ارد بالانجليزي لكن للاسف العنكليزيه عندي ضعيفه على العموم قمة الرقه ومافي اي خطأ خاصه البيت ولا اقول كله روعه والاول والاخير افضل

A wonderful and sensitive speech

[قطرات الندى]

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اذا كـانت تـرجـمتـك صـحيحـه فعلا

فيالها من معاني رائعه

أبدعت بها فكراً وتفوقاً

أجبرتنا ان نتعمق ونتعايش

معها بإحساسنا

ثم التصفيق الحار لها

لروعتها ولروعة كاتبها

ولا تحرمنا من إبداعاتكـ

وشـكر خـاص مـوصـول لك

أخـي تـعـز الـعز عـلـى التـرجـمـه

قـطـرات الـنـدى....!!!

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[اميرالاحزان]

my brother

al ainee

I'm realy admired in you

, it is a good idea to describe a sad girl.

my regards

your brother

the prince of sadnesses

[al ainee]

]thank you every body for our partecipation
and I hope to write English

thank you
your friend al ainee[/]

[..::*بلقيس*::..]

first of all i want to say that i am so glad and happy to see you people around in this section writting and partecipating eventhough some of you couldn't write in english but it doesn't really matter as long as you partecipated ...and secondly i want to thank you al ainee for posting such a thread ... your words were pwerful ..yet they are so sad ... and touchy ...keep it up brother and i wish to see more and more threads in this section ...
my best wishes to all of you ....

[بحيبح]

thanks alot al ainee

and congraulation for this nice and impresing poet

but girls always crying even if they a bitting man

but it was funtastic